The first impression is very good. The color is easy on the eyes and the font is clear and readable.
The cute graphic instantly gives me the impression of quality, and personable service. It also implies you do small to medium sized parties. No need actually to call yourself small, is there? Some of my favorite words are; Intimate, quaint, personal, distinctive, upscale, quality, ah the list goes on.
#1 Change you index page "title" to your company name so when we look up it doesn't say "index". This will help appearances as well as get you a better ranking on the search engines. More on SEO later.
#2 Writing "copy" is a bear. That it can take hours to write a 7 word sentence is testimony to that. So what are "caliber foods" ? Do you mean "High caliber foods" ?
#3 let me click! The list of parties makes me want to click on it. If you write a short page for each one your visitors will respond.
This last one should be number one.
#4 Place your contact information higher in the page. Give me a phone number to call toot suite. I had to scroll down to see the "contact" link. Even then it was hard to see in the same color as the page text. After all you want an e-mail and/or phone call from this page right?
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