I'm new here, I just found this site and don't know if this is even the right forum to be asking this in. I'm interested in opening my own Cafe/Diner in a small town in New York. I was wondering if anyone that has wrote a business plan to get a business loan could look over mine and tell me what I would need to improve or what I don't really need in it? I am almost done with it, I'm just trying to tweak it up a bit to make it sound professional and hopefully I would be able to get the loan necessary to make my dream come true. I will send my business plan to you via email if you would like to help me out. Thank you to anyone that can help me.
Edited by AaronJack93 - 3/25/14 at 6:12pm